THE ITALICIZED PART IN the paragraph below was the part, which Ma’am Elvi asked me to remove because it ruins the essence and the seriousness of my essay.
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This is very significant in today’s society since the YOUTH, who are the STUDENTS, are the HOPE of the future – just like what Dr. Jose Rizal said. If we practice excellence and being outstanding as early as now, diminutively, we will change the way things go. We may not have the ability to change the revolution of the Earth in the Solar System, but we can change the things inside that round heavenly object revolving around the Solar System – the Earth.
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What do you think? I roved it. Did I make the right decision? Well, I suppose I did....
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